[Jougukny]

Originally Posted by BikerChick

Sorry to msg you out of the blue. Here's the thing.

I wrote a book together with a friend. My boyfriend keeps saying it's no good. I think he's just jealous tho. He's a big time poster here, so I told him I'm going to pick a random person here, and ask them, and we ended up betting on it.

So go to [Deleted] and call it either way. Good or no good.

Thanks.

I liked the Characters and how you're getting into the heads of them and letting the reader 'discover' things about them. I thought the dog 'Rex' could have been more of a co-antagonits and have some 'ailment' that keeps his owner caring for it in a high maintenane way (cost of vet bills/ expensive food that he cannot affod/ maybe a puddle on the floor from time to time - maybe the dog's old?) - The women who come to an awareness of 'The Asylum' each needed a chapter on their own to introduce the reader to their lives that 'brought' them there. Anyway....i don't have a printer, and i don't like reading off the computer (unless i'm doing research scanning and collecting). But i'll print off a copy at a friend's place.

I think it's a good premise for a more fully involved character study and interactions between mis-matched personalities. It's got some real potential...the first four chaps that i read were okay.

m sure you have better opinion than mine. But, there ya go.

Random Guy: Signing out!

[funkywaggnelz]

TL;DR plus it seemed weird.

[FireFox]

Didn't bother with it since it was just spam.

I'm sure he thanks you for creating a thread containing his message though. More advertising for him...yay.

[Jorsoft]

I didn't think anybody here would have actually clicked the link. Nice to know it's actually a book and not a bunch of virus-filled porn atleast.

[funkywaggnelz]

Still doesn't mean I'm gonna click it.

[Akubane]

lol well I kinda feel silly for goign to read it then XD good i don't have much free time. wont bother lol.

only sucks cause I thought i was special for a moment -.-

shot down again.

hahahaha

[Trifid]

I was reluctant to click on my "private" message.

[Silverlord]

ahh how many thought score I got a message from a chick, maybe i'll get lucky lol

[Trotter]

"She" sent it to a lot of people, including several mods. "she" was banned. And the book sucked.

Interesting appeal used to get attention, though. but, seeing as the IP is in Romania, I doubt "she" was being honest (I don't know of any members there off hand).