[-=ASFT=-Soldier]

Can some people plz review my website
it www.asft.tk i think its a good page
but i need your advice

[NeO3k]

The sites , o.k. The layout is lame. Try
ClanTemplates for a free template for your site. Unless of course you can or have someone who can make his or your own. I think there needs to be more info really about your clan, members etc. And the info on the first page needs to be set up better.
In other words, Just get a better layout.

[Retro]

I think perhaps you should create a link to "about us" and "funny laws". This would make the site easier to navigate rather than a large page of scrolling text. I think more info in general would also be needed if you want visitors to return to the website although the forum would perhaps draw people back to the site.

It depends whether your using your website for your members to meet up and discuss topics on the forums or just to advertise yourself to other gamers.

[confusedideal]

Okay, so I know this slightly off topic, but I noticed on your page the Kentucky law about carrying an ice cream cone in your pocket, and I have an explanation about that. In the old days (back when horses were extremely important transportation wise), it was an easy way to steal a horse by putting an ice cream cone in your pocket. The horse would smell the cone and follow the person around. The horse thief could claim that he/she didn't steal the horse because it followed him/her home.

[dbernie41]

I guess ice cream had alot stonger scent back then