that is nicer though, but what r u trying to communicate? the text, isnt it? make it stand out. text and color plays MOST IMPORRTANT part, where I say most important, I mean it. I had spent 4 months just to understand color theory (**** it was harder than learning advance level photoshop).
also We're Pros (ya every body will know after reading it) that u r wispering. dont yell, dont wisper. make a way through it.