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I would like to thank You and, Mr. Ching, for taking the time to interview me for openings at the Widgnet group of mytech. It was a pleasure to have spoken with you. The time spent, reaffirms my desire to join your group.I hope a decision has been taken on the matter.
Please let me know if I could provide you with any additional information about my background and goals. I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards
Subject for the email is :Rickie Spades: Interview 3 June 2004